Chapter 3 – Page 2
While going through this story again, I will slightly edit the transcribed words. This is to fix errors and to make some characters more consistent in their portrayal.
For an example: About halfway through making this chapter I decided that ‘Koi doesn’t use contractions. Through out the original you can still see her use them from time to time.
Words:
Kashikoi: Besides, we are almost there.
Hayai: So.. we’re going to Shiro?
Kashikoi: Correct!
Hayai: Why are we going to the old fort?
Kashikoi: “Intellectual growth should start at birth and only end at death”, and at Shiro will increase.
Hayai: Does that mean training?
Kashikoi: A week of it!
Hayai: A week? You didn’t tell me we would be gone for a week!
Kashikoi: You did not ask.
Hayai: But I didn’t pack for more then a day trip.
Kashikoi: That is why I have already stocked up the fort.
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